Friday, October 24, 2008

Why the craft of copy writing is difficult and important

My daughter has skills beyond her age, I think. Don’t all parents? Well, we aren’t delving into that matter today. What we will do is use that premise to see why every single word in an ad’s copy content must be crafted to interest and fluidly draw the reader further in

Here’s an Epson ad targeting the home-user. Not an award-winning piece, or nothing clever, some creatives might say, but let’s dissect. Effective main visual to start with; unusual to have a typical family portrait in a magazine ad and more importantly, that’s the target audience.



Now let’s get to the copy.

Interesting headline to go with the main visual. It communicates the proposition of the product clearly. The captions in the portrait are pure emotion play, while bringing up the substantiations to the proposition. Dad and mom think their children are the best, children know Mom is the one who usually helps them with work at home and everyone knows Dad tries to avoid doing any work at home if he can. In reverse psychology, appealing to the emotions of Dad and Mom, who make the ultimate purchase decision.

My only problem with this ad is that the body copy below the headline is not really required or could have been much briefer and to the point.

Tuesday, October 21, 2008

What's in an Idea?


See the picture above. It’s a picture of branded goodies (a calendar, flower vase cum sponsored banquet table brander, wall map of the world and a goody bag). Now tell me, which is the real idea amongst all the items pictured.
We’re talking captive, CEO/CFO/CMO audience from the worldwide cement industry, annual event, conference opening day banquet, etc, etc. How about the real cement bag converted to goody bag?
Send me those little ideas that took you the extra mile.

Monday, October 20, 2008

Global Financial Meltdown is Welcome

All respectable publications, newsletters and blogs are reporting that an influx of bankers and assorted financial services professionals in a state of flux are eyeing careers in marketing communications.

I suggest that is a good thing, considering the bankers I have met over my 25 years in the ad business are streets ahead in strategic thinking, grooming and general intellectual capability.
Just remember the clients who paid bills on time, no questions asked, for all your tireless work.

They are also, I suggest, sufficiently trained in craft to be assimmilated into key positions in PR, Media Planning, Strategic Planning, Finance, even Creative.

Let's open our doors.

Monday, August 4, 2008

R U 2 Casual w Your Biz Talk?

Courtesy: Andy Beal's Marketing Pilgrim (www.blog.marketingpilgrim.com)

Hey, you know me by now. I read the Wall Street Journal. I do read other things as well. I just figure that my sports addiction may not be of interest to the internet marketing crowd so I talk about that elsewhere (Let’s Go Mets!).
The WSJ had an interesting article on a phenomenon that has become a bit of a pet peeve for me. It’s about the new English that the internet has spawned and its apparent shortcomings for those in the more traditional business world. I know I may come off as sounding “old school” but I don’t mind because I am. This isn’t a new rant for me. When it come to business I firmly believe that “r” is just letter not a verb (are) and “8″ is number and not something you just did at a restaurant. It seems like corporate America agrees.
The story revolves around young job hunters and their apparent cluelessness about how the rest of the world writes when it is trying to get work done. While many of these folks have great credentials and get far enough through the process that there may be a job offer waiting only to have their resume tossed into the “circular file” because they follow up and actually use terms like “hiya” and “thanx” in the correspondence and then top it off with multiple exclamation points and emoticons. Yikes. Imagine them working with a client and writing “Thx 4 your biz. U r a gr8 client!!!!!!!” I can see why the job would slip through their fingers.
Many follow up immediately after an interview using a Blackberry and think that they are being efficient but actually come off as not being able to digest something and think about it. Getting something done to say you got it done is not going to impress anyone. It really is the thought that counts in many situations. Then there are the interviewees who become “friends” of interviewers on Facebook and the like. I can’t even fathom the lack of understanding that would possess someone to do that.
The Internet marketing application of this stuff is simple. It’s about knowing how the other person, your customer / prospect, hears things that should be most important. While it may be efficient and sometimes even clever to create internet shorthand on the fly that should be done behind the scenes only. You have to make sure that the person who receives any truncated messages actually will understand you. What just a few short years ago would have looked like someone fell asleep on their keyboard is now considered to be communication. Your modern way of interacting may even cause someone to dismiss you as being unprofessional because you don’t appear to have a grasp of the language. That stuff affects the bottom line.
Does this sound harsh? Well, I suppose it is. The truth often is. For you younger folks in the industry (which I know there are many) you will have to make adjustments to those who have the ability to pay you and not think that they should come around to how you do things. That’s a basic sales and marketing precept; empathize with your client so you can meet their needs. You can “play the game” and be successful or can be like Chris Brubaker, a junior at Iowa State University who apparently has it all figured out and feels that “textspeak” will be accepted as normal business practice. He says “text messages are much more short and to the point. General communication is becoming more electronic.” First of all, what does that mean? My next question for Chris is, “R U nuts?”

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Thursday, July 17, 2008

Young graduates shunning advertising careers?

In a recent post in Ad Age Digital, Marc Brownstein states new graduates in the US are choosing industries other than advertising.

Well, it isn't a factor exclusive to the US. While it may be easier to attract young graduates to the creative departments in ad agencies or digital outfits, it is definitely becoming difficult for other departments such as client services.

The problem may be that prospective candidates get the impression they will remain in the sidelines without any real responsibilities for a long time. If they are told that they will get opportunities to immerse themselves in the business doing reasonably critical tasks, they may be more interested. Agencies need to let their guard down and test the waters by promising and then giving new graduates real challenges.